IELTS Writing Task 1: jarayon diagrammasi (process)
Jarayon diagrammasi biror narsa qanday ishlab chiqarilishini yoki tabiiy jarayon qanday kechishini bosqichma-bosqich ko'rsatadi. Bu yerda raqamlar deyarli yo'q, shuning uchun ball bosqichlarni to'g'ri tartibda, majhul nisbat (passive voice) va ketma-ketlik so'zlari bilan tasvirlashga bog'liq.
Qadam-baqadam strategiya
- Kirish: jarayon nima ekanini o'z so'zlaringiz bilan yozing.
- Overview: nechta bosqich borligini, qayerdan boshlanib qayerda tugashini va jarayon tsiklik yoki chiziqli ekanini ayting.
- 1-asosiy abzats: jarayonning birinchi yarmi (masalan, xom ashyo tayyorlash).
- 2-asosiy abzats: ikkinchi yarmi (ishlov berish, qadoqlash, yetkazish).
- Ishlab chiqarish jarayonida asosan passive voice ishlating: "The beans are roasted", tabiiy jarayonda esa active ham mos.
Tuzoqlar va keng tarqalgan xatolar
- Bosqichlarni o'tkazib yuborish yoki tartibini buzish — har bir bosqich eslatilishi kerak.
- Faqat "then... then... then" ishlatish — ketma-ketlik so'zlarini almashtirib turing.
- Diagrammadagi yorliqlarni so'zma-so'z ko'chirib, gap tuzmaslik.
- Overviewda bosqichlar sonini noto'g'ri sanash.
O'zbek tilida so'zlashuvchilar ko'p qiladigan xatolar
Writing bo'limida o'zbek tilida so'zlashuvchilarda ko'p uchraydigan holatlar:
- Artikllarni tushirib qoldirish yoki ortiqcha qo'yish: «the most of people» emas, «most people».
- Sondan keyin ko'plik -s ni unutish: o'zbekcha «uch kitob», lekin inglizcha «three books», «20 percent of students».
- O'zbek tilidagi uzun, vergul bilan ulangan gap tuzilishini ko'chirish — ingliz tilida bunday gaplarni nuqta yoki bog'lovchi bilan bo'lish kerak.
- Present Perfect va Past Simple ni chalkashtirish: aniq o'tgan davr (in 2010, between 2005 and 2010) uchun Past Simple ishlatiladi.
Foydali iboralar
- the process begins with
- at the next stage
- once X has been done,
- is then transferred to
- after being heated,
- is finally packaged and distributed
- the cycle then repeats
- in the final step
Namunaviy javob
The diagram shows how olive oil is produced, from harvesting the olives to bottling the oil, in seven stages.
The diagram illustrates the stages involved in producing olive oil. Overall, there are seven steps, beginning with the harvest in the field and ending with the bottled oil being sent to shops.
The process begins when ripe olives are collected from the trees, either by hand or with machines. They are then transported to a factory, where leaves and dirt are removed and the fruit is washed in cold water. At the next stage, the clean olives are crushed into a thick paste, including the stones.
Once the paste has been prepared, it is mixed slowly for around 30 minutes so that the oil begins to separate. After that, the mixture is placed in a machine that spins at high speed, separating the oil from the water and solids. Finally, the oil is stored in tanks for several weeks, filtered, and poured into bottles before being distributed to supermarkets.
IELTS mock imtihonini ilovada topshiring
TilUstoz ilovasida to'liq IELTS mock testlari, Writing va Speaking javoblaringizni mezonlar bo'yicha baholash hamda sun'iy intellekt Ustoz bilan Speaking mashqlari bor.
Ro'yxatdan o'tib, mock topshirish Darajangizni bepul aniqlang
Mashq: o'zingizni tekshiring
To'g'ri variantni tanlang.
Bo'sh joyni BITTA so'z bilan to'ldiring.
Bu yerda 4 ta savol berilgan; to'liq mashq (5 ta savol) ilovadagi «Tayyorlanish» bo'limida.
Mashq qiling
4 ta savol. Javobni tanlang yoki yozing va «Tekshirish»ni bosing.