IELTS Writing Task 2: afzallik va kamchilik essesi

Bu turdagi savol biror holat yoki tendensiyaning afzallik va kamchiliklarini so'raydi. Ba'zan qo'shimcha savol bo'ladi: "Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" — unda qaysi tomon og'irroq ekanini aniq aytishingiz shart. Savolni diqqat bilan o'qing: ba'zan faqat afzalliklar yoki faqat kamchiliklar so'raladi.

Qadam-baqadam strategiya

  1. Savol turini aniqlang: faqat ikkalasini sanash kerakmi yoki qaysi biri ustun ekanini ham baholash kerakmi?
  2. Kirish: mavzuni qayta ifodalang; agar "outweigh" so'ralgan bo'lsa, javobingizni darhol ayting.
  3. 1-asosiy abzats: afzalliklar — bir-ikkita, har biri tushuntirish va misol bilan.
  4. 2-asosiy abzats: kamchiliklar — xuddi shu tuzilmada.
  5. Xulosa: ikkalasini umumlashtiring va (kerak bo'lsa) qaysi biri og'irroq ekanini qayta tasdiqlang.

Tuzoqlar va keng tarqalgan xatolar

  • "Outweigh" savoliga javob bermaslik — faqat sanab chiqish yetarli emas.
  • Afzallik va kamchiliklarni bitta abzatsda aralashtirib yuborish.
  • "Advantage" so'zini qayta-qayta ishlatish — muqobillar: benefit, merit, drawback, downside.

O'zbek tilida so'zlashuvchilar ko'p qiladigan xatolar

Writing bo'limida o'zbek tilida so'zlashuvchilarda ko'p uchraydigan holatlar:

  • Artikllarni tushirib qoldirish yoki ortiqcha qo'yish: «the most of people» emas, «most people».
  • Sondan keyin ko'plik -s ni unutish: o'zbekcha «uch kitob», lekin inglizcha «three books», «20 percent of students».
  • O'zbek tilidagi uzun, vergul bilan ulangan gap tuzilishini ko'chirish — ingliz tilida bunday gaplarni nuqta yoki bog'lovchi bilan bo'lish kerak.
  • Present Perfect va Past Simple ni chalkashtirish: aniq o'tgan davr (in 2010, between 2005 and 2010) uchun Past Simple ishlatiladi.

Foydali iboralar

  • One major benefit of X is that
  • Another advantage is
  • The most serious drawback, however, is
  • A further downside is that
  • In my view, the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks
  • This is particularly true for
  • On balance,

Namunaviy javob

Question: More and more people now work from home rather than in an office. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

One major benefit of working from home is the time it saves. In large cities, employees may spend two hours a day travelling to and from the office, and removing this journey gives them more energy for both work and family life. Remote work also allows companies to hire talented people who live far away, which can raise the quality of their teams.

The most serious drawback, however, is isolation. Without daily contact with colleagues, some workers feel lonely, and younger staff in particular miss the chance to learn by watching experienced professionals. A further downside is that the boundary between work and home can disappear, leading people to answer emails late into the night.

On balance, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, provided that companies combine home working with regular days in the office.

Namuna savollar

Shu turdagi savollarga misollar (har biriga 40 daqiqada kamida 250 so'z):

  • Working from home is becoming more common. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
  • Many schools now use computers and tablets in almost every lesson. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS mock imtihonini ilovada topshiring

TilUstoz ilovasida to'liq IELTS mock testlari, Writing va Speaking javoblaringizni mezonlar bo'yicha baholash hamda sun'iy intellekt Ustoz bilan Speaking mashqlari bor.

Ro'yxatdan o'tib, mock topshirish Darajangizni bepul aniqlang

Mashq: o'zingizni tekshiring

Har bir so'zni ma'nosi bo'yicha guruhga ajrating.

Eng yaxshi variantni tanlang.

Bu yerda 4 ta savol berilgan; to'liq mashq (5 ta savol) ilovadagi «Tayyorlanish» bo'limida.

Mashq qiling

4 ta savol. Javobni tanlang yoki yozing va «Tekshirish»ni bosing.

  1. drawback

    Javobni tanlang
    Javob va izoh

    a negative point — "Drawback" — kamchilik, salbiy tomon.

  2. merit

    Javobni tanlang
    Javob va izoh

    a positive point — "Merit" — fazilat, ijobiy tomon.

  3. downside

    Javobni tanlang
    Javob va izoh

    a negative point — "Downside" — salbiy tomon, "drawback" ning sinonimi.

  4. The question asks: "Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" Which conclusion answers it?

    Javobni tanlang
    Javob va izoh

    On balance, the drawbacks of fast fashion are far more serious than the low prices it offers. — B qaysi tomon og'irroq ekanini aniq aytadi. A va C savolning asosiy qismiga javob bermaydi.

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