Maqolaga taqriz: inglizcha iboralar (C1)
Vaziyat: Hamkasbingizning ilmiy maqolasiga yozgan taqrizingizni u bilan muhokama qilyapsiz. Bu sahifada shu vaziyat uchun 5 ta inglizcha ibora — o'zbekcha tarjimasi, izohi va misoli bilan, namuna dialog va qisqa mashq.
5 ta asosiy ibora
Overall, it's a strong paper, but the argument loses focus in places.
Umuman olganda, maqola kuchli, lekin ba'zi joylarda asosiy fikr tarqalib ketadi.
Overall — umuman olganda. Taqrizni kuchli tomondan boshlang. loses focus — asosiy fikrdan chalg'iydi. in places — ba'zi joylarda.
The conclusion goes further than the data allows.
Xulosa ma'lumotlar ko'tara oladigan darajadan oshib ketgan.
go further than — ...dan uzoqqa ketmoq. the data allows — ma'lumotlar ko'tara oladi. Xulosa dalildan kuchliroq bo'lsa — taqrizdagi eng ko'p uchraydigan e'tiroz.
You might want to tone down the claim in the abstract.
Annotatsiyadagi da'voni biroz yumshatsangiz yaxshi bo'lardi.
You might want to ... — ... qilsangiz yaxshi bo'lardi (juda muloyim maslahat). tone down — yumshatmoq. abstract — annotatsiya ("annotation" emas).
It isn't entirely clear how the participants were selected.
Ishtirokchilar qanday tanlangani unchalik aniq emas.
It isn't entirely clear — unchalik aniq emas ("tushunarsiz"ning yumshoq shakli). how ... were selected — darak gap tartibi, savol tartibi emas.
It would be strengthened by a comparison with earlier studies.
Avvalgi tadqiqotlar bilan solishtirilsa, maqola yanada kuchayardi.
would be strengthened — kuchaygan bo'lardi (passiv + would). a comparison with — ... bilan solishtirish. Tanqidni taklif shaklida berish.
Namuna dialog
Bu namuna: darsdagi 5 ibora suhbatda ketma-ket qanday ishlatilishini ko'rsatadi. Suhbatdosh — a fellow researcher anxious about your review of their paper. Ustoz bilan haqiqiy suhbatda savol va javoblar boshqacha bo'lishi mumkin.
- Siz: Overall, it's a strong paper, but the argument loses focus in places. — Umuman olganda, maqola kuchli, lekin ba'zi joylarda asosiy fikr tarqalib ketadi.
- Suhbatdosh: I see. — Tushunarli.
- Siz: The conclusion goes further than the data allows. — Xulosa ma'lumotlar ko'tara oladigan darajadan oshib ketgan.
- Suhbatdosh: Right. — Shunday.
- Siz: You might want to tone down the claim in the abstract. — Annotatsiyadagi da'voni biroz yumshatsangiz yaxshi bo'lardi.
- Suhbatdosh: Okay. — Xo'p.
- Siz: It isn't entirely clear how the participants were selected. — Ishtirokchilar qanday tanlangani unchalik aniq emas.
- Suhbatdosh: Mm-hm. — Ha-ha.
- Siz: It would be strengthened by a comparison with earlier studies. — Avvalgi tadqiqotlar bilan solishtirilsa, maqola yanada kuchayardi.
Grammatika: might want to, isn't entirely — taqrizdagi muloyimlik
Taqrizda tanqid aniq, lekin hurmatli bo'lishi kerak. Yumshatuvchi vositalar: You might want to ... (maslahat), It isn't entirely clear ... (yumshoq inkor), It would be strengthened by ... (taklif). "Your conclusion is wrong" o'rniga "The conclusion goes further than the data allows" — muammo shaxsga emas, matnga qaratiladi. entirely, quite, somewhat kabi so'zlar inkorni yumshatadi.
- The second section is somewhat repetitive. — Ikkinchi bo'lim biroz takrorlanadi.
- You might want to check these figures again. — Bu raqamlarni qayta tekshirsangiz yaxshi bo'lardi.
- It's not entirely clear what this graph shows. — Bu grafik nimani ko'rsatayotgani unchalik aniq emas.
Mashq qiling
5 ta savol. Javobni tanlang yoki yozing va «Tekshirish»ni bosing.